So here’s how I’m introing the male half of the mentor-duo, Asher Sterne:
He’s thin and thirty with short, spiked hair. He hasn’t lost his acne. He’s got huge green eyes and cheekbones that look like they’re out to get you.
I find that I prefer punchier, briefer character descriptions. Just give the reader enough to get her brain juices filling in the blanks.
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